sounds like...
exactly what you said it is. someone's first actual attempt at this style of music. so that's good. you've performed to-par. now, refine it. you, as a whole, gotta work on changing the tune up a bit. change things up. if you're looking into Brostep, Skrillex is a good, and very popular example. Scary Monsters and Nice Sprites demonstrates the two stages of a dubstep song. a kind of serene area, and a rugged area where all the bass is.